My experience in Electronic literacy
Why is electronic literacy important?
According to a webpage (Literacy. (n.d). in Wikipedia. Retrieved September 14, 2010, from http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Litercy): Electronic literacy is the ability to use electronic tools or internet such as web browser, word processing programs and text messages, etc. Electronic literacy is called too as multimedia literacy, computer literacy or technacy. Nowadays it is very important to know about this kind of literacy, because if you do not know how use electronic tools you are consider illiterate. In schools, the use of electronic tools is very important, because educations and technology are together. My experience in Electronic literacy had been developing thanks to the school.
I started using electronic tools since I was in the primary school. All this began when my teachers asked me investigations in Internet, of this way I began using web browsers. Also, when I wrote resumes, descriptions, etc. I was using word processing texts. I continued working with electronic tools in the secondary school and in the high school, where I studied computation. I began familiarized more with computers and the technology; the majority of my works were in computer. These years and works were my introduction in electronic literacy.
Electronic literacy is important in my life because, the things that I learnt before had been helped me for understanding a lot of topics and activities nowadays. Now, I can search important information about the bachelor that I am studying. The knowledge that I have about how use the computer is very important because I can work and study with modern activities. In the bachelor that I am studying thanks to technology I can work and know people of other countries who teach me how write and speak in English across websites like: messenger, facebook, metroflog, hotmail, hi5, etc.
Moreover, Electronic literacy can help me in the future too. This mean, for giving a better work in the future one of the most important requisites is to know the use of computers and electronic tools. If we learn about electronic tools nowadays it will be better for us to understand the technology in the future. Furthermore, as a future English teacher I will need new ways and materials for teaching to my students through technology. Also in different works electronic literacy will be very important too, because it allows having communication around the world, for example in different business is important to have contact or communication with people of different countries.
To sum up, in order to avoid being an illiterate nowadays and in the future, we need to know more about electronic tools, the use of the computer and Internet. This kind of literacy allows us to represent a competence in the society, to have communication with everybody around the world, to know new people, to learn more in an easily and funny way, to be informed about what is happen in the world, etc. In addition, when we are studying a new language, we can improve our skills working through different spaces in the Internet like blogs, browsers, etc.
Hi!, your essay is very complete, the structure you followed is the way to write a good essay. I think that the way you write is very understandable, which is very important in writting, it helps you to keep the interest of your readers in the texts you write.
ResponderEliminarThere are not many mistakes, just a few ones such as the fact that you did not state the aspects that you would be talking about on your essay in your introductory paragraph, but I liked the way you started, with a reference, which makes more formal your essay.
Instead of "primary and secondary school" you can say "elementary and junior high school", but these are just minimal mistakes, in general your essay was ok.
Arigato.
Helo Rosa, well your essay it's ok, I always check your essay before you published it, but now I didn't, your essay was good, it has a good structure, and I think that it was understandable, but you made a lot of mistakes most of them of vocabulary,in the first paragraph after the introduction you wrote resumes and I think you meant summaries,in that same paragrapg you wrote:I began familiarized, i think it would be better if your write: I began to be familiarized. In the same paragrapgh you wrote I studied computation,and is I studied cumputing, remember that the activities should end with -ing.
ResponderEliminarin the next paragraph you wrote: had been helped, and I think it sound better if you write: had been helpful to me for my understanding.Also is better "meet people from other countries" not "know people of other countries", who teach me how TO teach and write.
in the next paragrapgh instead of requisites is requirements.
I, like your essay I could undestand it, and I think I like it because you're good at writing you just have to improve your vocabulary, good job Rosa. xoxo